Co-writing a fantasy

A friend and I decided to rev each other up by co-writing a fantasy. Back and forward we went writing a section each continuing the story from where the other left off. There's a few added messages in our exchange.

Me-

I have a hotel room in town. You rock up at the door in a big jacket and I bring you inside, you then remove the jacket and reveal you are wearing the body suit lingerie you had sent in a photo to me. You look at me with that look so I move forward and take your head in my hands and kiss you deeply. You relax into me and then reach up with your hand and hold the back of my neck softly while we continue to kiss. I slide my hands down your neck and run my fingers lightly over your chest before reaching around behind you pulling your hips firmly into mine, our kisses become more intense...more urgent, our hands begin wandering and exploring each other's bodies. I slide the straps off your shoulders and pull down your body suit lingerie revealing your breasts. With one hand I cupped the back of your neck and head and the other I reach up from below and cup your right breast while my lips meet your chest and kiss up to the crease in your neck. Leaving little bites as I go. Both of our breathing is getting faster and we both want more. I grab your hand, turn and lead you out onto the balcony, slide down your clothing to reveal all of you and push you back into a seat, you sitting there completely exposed, glass panels all around the balcony not hiding anything, people sitting in their apartments directly across from us able to see everything if they were paying attention. I take 1 knee, sliding my hands from your knees up the outside of your legs to your waist, my lips following shortly after kissing a line up the inside of your legs, you open them more to allow me access, slightly pushing your hips out to me asking for it. I kiss the soft skin of your thighs, slowing as I get closer to your groin. Each kiss becomes slower as I pull my lips back before planting the next. I'm right next to your pussy and I can feel you want my tongue, I slide my tongue slowly up through your slit until I reach the top, pause for a moment before I begin to flick my tongue up and down rythmically. My hands hold your lower back as I pleasure you with my tongue. Your hand holding the back of my head, trembling almost as if you don't know if you want more or you need it to stop because it feels so good.

Her-

My hips are rocking me into your tongue, definitely want more because it does feel so good.

I take your hand and guide you to finger me as you continue to suck on and play with my clit.

I spot a woman in the window of the building across from us in the window, one hand lifted under her dress, touching herself, her other hand pulling her top off as she grabs her breasts, getting off watching us.

This sends me over the edge, and my back arches hard as I drive myself into your tongue and lips and cum hard for the first time. Little kisses on my clit as I settle. I pull you up to me and kiss you, and I’m able to taste myself on you. Your hands are still ever so gently stroking me and teasing the entrance to my pussy. Half reclined back on the chair, I grab your hips and pull you into me, so our bodies are pressed together, and between my spread legs I can feel your hard through your pants, pressing into me. This drives me crazy and I really want to fuck, but you’re a god damn tease and won’t let me yet.

Me-

I smile down at you knowingly, full aware what you want but reluctant to give it to you quite so easily, I'm hard, so hard and long to feel the wet warmth of your pussy surrounding my throbbing cock but denying you that little longer shows I'm in control. I notice you keep glancing across the space and to the apartments in another building, there must be someone watching. I place my hands around your throat and pull you up out of the chair, if there's someone watching I'm going to give them a better view. I push you forward against the glass hard so your tits are pressed against it for whoever is watching to enjoy. I use my legs to sweep your feet wide and then bend down over you and kiss down your spine. One hand squeezing your ass, using my hands to feel all the pleasures your body has to offer. I lower myself under you again sucking your pussy into my lips, you are craving my cock inside you and I want to have you dripping wet, horny as all fuck and on the verge of orgasm before you get to feel me enter you.

Her-

Omg I literally just instinctively arched my back, and felt a wet throb between my legs reading that.

I’m rolling my hips back and forth, trying desperately to show you how wet and ready I am. My legs wide, arms up against the glass, nipples hard as they’re pressed into the cold glass, I wimper quietly, please? Please can we?

You look up at me and ask, what was that? Breathlessly, I ask again… please….

You stand up behind me and slam your body into mine so I’m squashed between you and the glass, and I can feel you hard against my back.

It drives the air out of me, and you lean into me, bite my ear lobe and whisper, please what? I cry out gently, part pain part raging desire, as you step back and smack me hard across my ass. It stings in the absolute best way possible, and I ask, please, please fuck me

Me-

With one hand I undo my belt and start to pull my pants down letting my solid cock spring out. With my other hand I reach under you and slide my fingers across your soaking pussy, your head is turned back at me looking at my cock with every flame of desire in your eyes. I reach forward and slide my fingers into your mouth, you lick your own wetness from them and moan. As I remove my fingers you utter it again, the words I loved hearing so much. "Please fuck me" I guide my cock to your opening, gently sliding it along your slit, not quite letting my cock enter you just holding myself there...you don't disappoint, with a sudden movement you force yourself back onto me taking my whole length deep inside you. I push you forward against the glass again, both my hands holding your hips hard and i push myself inside you again, feeling your body quiver as you take me, your moans are loud, resounding out between the buildings for everyone to hear, an invitation to watch.

Her-

I pause, just ever so slightly, to slowly push myself back onto you as deeply as I can go…. I just want to feel you deep inside me, and I throw my head back against your chest as you reach around and grab my breast hard and bite my neck gently before kissing it hard.

I moan, so hot and heavy and my legs turn to jelly under me.

There is a flat couch along the window, and our friend is still across the way, watching us, nodding at us to keep going.

You throw me across to the couch, pull my hips up to you as you push my back down, getting me into doggy position. You smack me again, hard, twice, ordering me to spread my legs.

I do so, and reach up to start rubbing my clit, I can’t help myself. My hips begin rhythmically rocking as I pleasure myself, and you enjoy the view before smacking me again, ordering me to stop. I wiggle my ass in the air, wanting you to enter me again.

Me-

I look down at your ass, the red marks slowly becoming evident from where I just smacked it. I grab your hips and slide myself inside you again, having you on the couch gives me greater purchase and I fuck you deep and hard, I can feel my cock swelling, I can feel the pleasure building in me and your moans are ringing in my ears driving me crazy. Right then I hear a knock on the hotel door.

Her-

"Haha, is screaming ‘fuck off, we’re busy!!!’ at the door an option?"

Me-

"You're writing the story."

Her-

Then that’s what happens, although I’m pretty sure whoever it is hears our loud groaning and sticks around to hear what happens.

We’re both on the edge, and I push myself back hard into you as my back arches with pleasure and my hips shake, and with one final thrust you cum deep inside me, pulling me one more time into you. You gently reach down to pull my hair from my face and see my eyes half closed with pleasure and a little smile on my face. It takes me a second to come back into my body.