M58
My first story..
June 30 2010
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RHP User
16 years ago
I can't read it... have to be a paid up member...
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RHP User
16 years ago
The story I have read? I can't access it either cos I'm a guest. I'm still waiting for feedback Wayne. WILDly waiting
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RHP User
16 years ago
I put my 1st story in too, but as a guest cant read it myself lol
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RHP User
16 years ago
Loved it! Easy to read, easy to imagine it happening to yourself as you read. Perhaps next time I won't read your words at work, 'twould be embarrassing to get caught. Look forward to lots more from you. Perhaps you will encourage more of the forum posters to input some nice erotic stories. xxJ
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RHP User
16 years ago
When are you coming to Melbourne so that we can enjoy some of that for real? xxJ
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RHP User
16 years ago
I'm reminding self to make sure Mr P' is around before I go checking out that sorta stuff, I'm definitely wanting me a dose of what they were having. Hehe, at least I can read it! Liked the flirt we can send from there too, "Just wanted to say that your story rocked!". Nice work Wayne!Lol Hottie, that's pretty funny. How do you read your comments? I am a bit surprised that you can't read your own story cos I know if a guest posts 'Hot Pics', they're given a code so they can view their set. I wonder if it's sad that I thought your story sounded rather romantic...Hugs... Mrs P'
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RHP User
16 years ago
dont wanna see comments, blushing now as it is, but since i have had some good feedback might share a few other experiences!
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Frankiesgame
16 years ago
didn't know you blushed snotty??
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RHP User
16 years ago
And for your rhp colleagues with the attention span of a goldfish... The abridged version right here in your thread?...I could do with some artificial stimulation...
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RHP User
16 years ago
Mrs P, I can be long enough!!!!
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RHP User
16 years ago
he he he Frankie i blush now as i am older and more respectable!!
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Frankiesgame
16 years ago
well I had to answer, but actually have seen the girl blush!! must have been one of my bad jokes!! can i cash in some of those Hugs Deb?? lololol
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RHP User
16 years ago
I can't access it as i am a guest .... but nice work Wayne
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RHP User
16 years ago
Well done :) I enjoyed the read very much.It is fun taking a look at the stories and adding our own, we got one of those "your story rocks" flirts but because I did two and Andy did one we do not know who it for :PKeep it up Wayne, I hope we get to see more!xx Salina
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RHP User
16 years ago
I cant read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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RHP User
16 years ago
Quoting 'helenishot' Mrs P, I can be long enough!!!!Quoting 'Frankiesgame' well I had to answer, but actually have seen the girl blush!! must have been one of my bad jokes!! can i cash in some of those Hugs Deb?? lololol But I'm a tad confused hottie... Isa only teasin, y'all r among a select group. After reading your story today, I can (hehe somehow... whew!) imagine you blushing in that rosy wonderful romantic vibe :-P I tell you what Frankie, I'll hold on awful tight to you till I can, hopefully, extricate myself from this minefield... Ima gittin too old fer thees...Hehe hugs bof o ya... deb XoX
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RHP User
16 years ago
Quoting 'WildTassieGypsy' The story I have read? I can't access it either cos I'm a guest. I'm still waiting for feedback Wayne. WILDly waiting It is the one I showed you :-) Have feedback for you on your's - will catch you on MSN
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RHP User
16 years ago
that guests could not view the stories... :-( Oh well problem fixed ;-) hugs to ya all and thanks so much for the great feedback... The challenge with stories is how much is real vs fantasy.... ;-) hugs Wayne x
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RHP User
16 years ago
Quoting 'iluvtosmile' Loved it! Easy to read, easy to imagine it happening to yourself as you read. Perhaps next time I won't read your words at work, 'twould be embarrassing to get caught. Look forward to lots more from you. Perhaps you will encourage more of the forum posters to input some nice erotic stories. xxJ Thanks J - thought I'd try a different format than others had done... makes the reader read it more slowly and take in the emotion and feeling of it... hope you were not squirming too much in your seat at work ;-) As for encouraging others to input their stories - for sure... i drew on personal experience when writing this one so it is actually easy to do if you think of it from that perspective. sure there is some fantasy there... but you decided which is which ;-) As for Melbourne - I'm trying to make it to Melbourne drinks night - but we'll see hugs Wayne x
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RHP User
16 years ago
Quoting 'MrnMrsPeachypear'I'm reminding self to make sure Mr P' is around before I go checking out that sorta stuff, I'm definitely wanting me a dose of what they were having. Hehe, at least I can read it! Liked the flirt we can send from there too, "Just wanted to say that your story rocked!". Nice work Wayne!Lol Hottie, that's pretty funny. How do you read your comments? I am a bit surprised that you can't read your own story cos I know if a guest posts 'Hot Pics', they're given a code so they can view their set. I wonder if it's sad that I thought your story sounded rather romantic...Hugs... Mrs P' Mrs P.... read the next one when MrP is home ;-) hugs Wayne x
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RHP User
16 years ago
Quoting 'Mynameonurlips' And for your rhp colleagues with the attention span of a goldfish... The abridged version right here in your thread?...I could do with some artificial stimulation... Teasers... ok They’d met on the website… First timers both of them… They talked… They clicked… She took him home… They fell into bed… They didn’t speak… Naked…. Hot… Horny… Her breasts heaving expectantly… He kissed her lips… slowly… passionately… ....... enough for ya ;-) hugs Wayne x
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RHP User
16 years ago
Quoting 'Salina79'Well done :) I enjoyed the read very much.It is fun taking a look at the stories and adding our own, we got one of those "your story rocks" flirts but because I did two and Andy did one we do not know who it for :PKeep it up Wayne, I hope we get to see more!xx Salina Thanks Sal, Will go check out yours too. And yes - I've got 3 more done in similar fashion. hugs Wayne x
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RHP User
16 years ago
I am a bit confused as well, Mrs P, most of the text in that message went missing!! somehow made it better lol. apologies to wayne for stealing his post xxx
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RHP User
16 years ago
Quoting 'niceguy0068' Quoting 'Salina79'Well done :) I enjoyed the read very much.It is fun taking a look at the stories and adding our own, we got one of those "your story rocks" flirts but because I did two and Andy did one we do not know who it for :PKeep it up Wayne, I hope we get to see more!xx Salina Thanks Sal, Will go check out yours too. And yes - I've got 3 more done in similar fashion. hugs Wayne x Oh my! The first one got me hot enough... what would more do??
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RHP User
16 years ago
Quoting 'helenishot' I am a bit confused as well, Mrs P, most of the text in that message went missing!! somehow made it better lol. apologies to wayne for stealing his post xxx come here n give me a hug and it's all forgiven... there - better? hugs Wayne x
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RHP User
16 years ago
Quoting 'niceguy0068' Quoting 'Mynameonurlips' And for your rhp colleagues with the attention span of a goldfish... The abridged version right here in your thread?...I could do with some artificial stimulation... Teasers... ok They’d met on the website… First timers both of them… They talked… They clicked… She took him home… They fell into bed… They didn’t speak… Naked…. Hot… Horny… Her breasts heaving expectantly… He kissed her lips… slowly… passionately… ....... enough for ya ;-) hugs Wayne x I like the one you sent to my box....thank you. I feel so happySo very, very happyI'm the happiest monster you'll ever seeThere's no one as happy as me
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RHP User
16 years ago
hugs to you sweetie, .... soooo easily pleased.... and a gentleman!!
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RHP User
16 years ago
Quoting 'helenishot' I am a bit confused as well, Mrs P, most of the text in that message went missing!! somehow made it better lol. apologies to wayne for stealing his post xxx That seems to be happening a lot lately, a new form of moderating? Hehe, my comment on your story came through xox
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RHP User
16 years ago
no no no - not that kind of submission... ;-) Thanks for all the kind comments... I've just submitted my 2nd story to RHP based on the great feedback :-) got 3 more done too... me thinks maybe a book is in order.. hmmmm... ideas.. boiling... hugs Wayne x
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