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2nd Story is up..

July 22 2010

Well encouraged by the comments on my first story - I submitted story #2 to RHP... here it is http://www.redhotpie.com.au/Story/StoryRead.aspx?story=356 Keen for feedback - I'm really enjoying writing like this... Oh - and for those non members.... here's a teaser... The Club... She stirs from her slumber… Feeling more than a little horny… She rolls over.. Was it all a dream? No… He’s still laying there… Naked… Early morning sunlight reflecting off his soft white skin… They’d met at the club the night before… She kissed him gently on the lips… He woke… He smiled at her… He kissed her back… His hands touched her breast… She inhaled… Mmmmm His touch was so soft and tender… She wanted more… She kissed his neck.. Down to his nipple… Gentle tongue flicking across it…

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RHP User

15 years ago

Well done you have a knack!! :-) I got some negative responses from my post so not doing another. glad yours went so good! HIH

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RHP User

15 years ago

Quoting 'helenishot' Well done you have a knack!! :-) I got some negative responses from my post so not doing another. glad yours went so good! HIH I thought your story was good :-) But I guess personal taste - not everyone likes the things we like. I'm thinking to put the 12 I've written together and sell them as a book... just need to get my butt into gear and make it happen... yeah..right - easier said than done :-) hugs Wayne x

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RHP User

15 years ago

I even posted a comment on the stories page, but it seems, as a guest, Helen can't get in to read it... Helen... It surprises me that your story would have gotten negative responses considering it sounds like pretty much every man's dream from some of the comments we read in the forums. Sorry to hear that.I found time to have a quick read of your very horny story :-P The style leads me on to read more... but now is not the time.Mmmm hugs... Mrs P'

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RHP User

15 years ago

Just the teaser has me panting for more Wayne. Bring it on!!! xxILTS

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RHP User

15 years ago

...eloquent poetry? Good stuff anyway. Looks like there could be a few installments/chapters in this production?

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RHP User

15 years ago

Quoting 'Tonyerotic'...eloquent poetry? Good stuff anyway. Looks like there could be a few installments/chapters in this production? yeah - working on writing more... have actually written 11 now... some are VERY short - all in the same format though cos it seems to work for me... :) Quoting 'iluvtosmile' Just the teaser has me panting for more Wayne. Bring it on!!! xxILTS hmmm ILTS - yes - more to come... contemplating posting them on RHP or keeping them private... ;-) hugs Wayne

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RHP User

15 years ago

could you please tell me, how do i know my story is up, im a guest and cant see it thanks toohardtohandle

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RHP User

15 years ago

Quoting 'toohardtohandle' could you please tell me, how do i know my story is up, im a guest and cant see it thanks toohardtohandle You should be able to tell if your story is up by viewing your own profile and checking out your activity :-)

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RHP User

15 years ago

MrnMrsPeachypear i appreciate that toohardtohandle

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RHP User

15 years ago

could you help me again please iv had my story published but im a guest so does that mean i cant see what is being said about it and dont get to read it myself? thank you toohardtohandle

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RHP User

15 years ago

Mrs P thank you for your help im new to story telling and i didnt know how it worked i have written to them so i hope to hear back soon thank you toohardtohandle

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2nd Story is up..

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